"Come To Daddy"

Got some more work done on the comic - tightening up the ideas/brainstorming to make it more solid and setting out what I want each page to have. Thought if I wrote what was going on I could make it so not a panel was wasted while putting in a few extra ideas here and there. Doesn't look like it though!

Next is figuring out the problem panels - not sure how I can draw a couple of them and I don't want to have to explain much with text. My idea is that text will come last, the pictures should tell as much of the story as possible.

"..Only Part Of You Is Stuck In A Computer"

Rest of the roughs for the comic. Got a lot worse as I went on, just wanted to have finished it. Glad I did it though, I think the amount of pages is about right, but got to work on the panels a whole lot more. Doing this has made me see what I need to change though and come up with a few more ideas as I went through.

Eventually I'll get round to properly drawing it, hopefully the more I figure out the story layouts, the easier it'll be to draw. Very tempted to try and do the first couple of pages 'proper' but I never would have finished it.

"Cheap Cider, Cheap Cider.."

"I'm Going Off The Rails On A Crazy Train.."

Had a couple of ideas on the way home, so first things first:

1) What if leaves aren't green similar to the way the sea isn't really blue? Instead they're just reflecting the land's jealousy of the sky.

2) A mobile phone company that gives you 600 minutes free a month. But if you don't use them you get to add them on to the end of your life instead to prolong it.

Right, here's a couple of roughs I did at lunchtime for the origami story, would love to work on it tonight, but got band practice in - gulp - ten minutes! I better get ready and stop typ

JOYREX J9

Did some work on a new comic story (wanted to do it while it's still in my mind rather than the other one). Too knackered to post stuff up for now though, didn't get that far on it anyway. Hands are a nightmare! Origami Menagerie.