
My first Fourteen Nights post. Wanted to get on with something else rather than try to finish it. Which is wrong of me really. Hopefully have something else to post up tonight though.




The blog's birthday is today. The whole point of this blog is to encourage me to get my arse in gear and actually do some of the stuff I keep boring people about. Mainly, making some comics. It was a bumpy first six months, and I'm still not really doing as much as I should be, but things are actually moving along.
Finished my first comic. Ever. Even the Transformer and Action Force rip-offs I did as a kid never got finished as I was too bothered about making them good.
I followed the same advice for writing a novel: "Never try and write your masterpiece first". So I've done a comic based on a short film so I don't have to worry about plot, or even in some cases the pictures (many scenes are lifted straight from the paused film), but just actually finishing it, and practicing my layouts.
I'm actually quite fond of it, although there are loads of improvements needed. Took me a lot longer than it should have as well.
1)The main problem I have (apart from the shoddy drawing, which, I do kinda like) is that it doesn't actually make any sense. The film works, which is why I chose it. It's like a little pun and I found it quite funny. My comic however, just seems confusing and bizarre. I failed to emphasise the first 'teethed smile' and so the punchline is missed.
2) I rushed the title page as a last minute add on, I didn't plan it and it happened literally as I put the brush strokes down. If I had done some thumbnails I could have made a smart little graphic piece, I think the ideas are all there.
3) Dunno why I stuck with the first page. I really wanted to do him walking down the stairs and I stuck with the idea to the detriment of the story telling.
4) Originally, the only scenes that were actually framed were the scenes from the peeping tom's perspective. This kind of got lost when I replaced a couple of scenes and then failed to frame up the last panel. Shame, as I thought that was a nice idea.
5) Lots more stuff!
Still, I really enjoyed it and feel ready to do my first story - it's still not one of my favourites so I feel safe in mucking about with it, but I have taking a LONG time doing layouts for it. Feel more confident now though that it's OK to make mistakes. It's going to be called 'Levelling Out'.
I have some other projects to do in the meantime though, a comic with my friend Joel, a wedding invitation, a 14 Nights post (its about time) and my Cannibal Gymnastics band. Jesus, I wish I was still a student so I could squeeze the time in!
Now, back to the beer and Wire's Pink Flag.



So close.. nearly finished the comic. Loads of problems with it, including one major one where I realised I haven't made enough of the first smile - which is the whole point. Ah well, the whole idea was to do a comic that I wouldn't get caught up on being 'perfect'.
Defintely looking forward to doing the next project(s) though.
Need to go to bed, so here's my inks.
And a quick Emma Peel sketch because she is the best.
Since my last post I have been digging (well, mostly):
The Prisoner - Complete series - what an ending, what a great show.
PJ Harvey - 4 Track Demos
Galaxie 500 - The Portable Galaxie 500
Casanova
The Testament of Dr Mabuse
Bob Dylan - Blonde On Blonde
Bob Dylan - Highway 61 Revisited
Elastica - Elastica EP
Sparkelhorse - Good Morning Spider
Columbo - Etude in Black
Songs in The Key of Z
Essential Avengers Vol.2
Yeasayer - All Hour Cymbals
Aphex Twin - Selected Ambient Works 85 - 92
Eden Lake
Franklyn
Joy Division - Unknown Pleasures
Trojan Dub Box Set
Frank Miller era Daredevil
The Shaggs - My Pal Foot Foot
Wesley Willis - Cut The Mullet
The Invisibles Volume 1
The Slits - Cut
The Make-Up - Live! At Cold Rice
The Make-Up - In Mass Mind
Going to do nothing today and feel ok about it. Haven't posted in a bit, but I have been drawing/practicing guitar and reading. Thought I'd give myself a free pass today. Of course, that means just trying to read and watch fucking loads of stuff and then documenting it.
Defintely getting obsessed with trying to do everything. Must chill!
Oh yeah, and my PC seems to be dying on me (well, it seems to have been for quite some time now), lost my profile settings meaning I've lost all my web bookmarks, setting, passwords and all my little program settings. Gah. Surprisingly OK about it, just wish I had the money to get a new PC quicker. Seeing it as a good opportunity to clean house instead. Hence the chill.
Annoyingly though it doesn't seem to save anything now, so when I do re-apply all the old setting they disappear each time I log in. Bah.


Hmmm, kind of messed my comic up, check out the super-ugly panels at the bottom! Naturally, these are panels not in the film. Shouldn't have tried to wing it. Probably redo and scan it over later on.
DISCLAIMER: It is still unfinished, but I don't have any excuse for the bottom of the page. Holy crap it's bad.
EDIT: Just added it as a two pager with the first one. Despite this not turning out as I had hoped I'm really looking forward to finishing it and going back to my own story!





Still failing to finish this comic. Set myself a deadline of tonight and I can't stop messing with it and trying to improve it. I'm still kind of enjoying doing it though so I'm not sure if I should stop and just wind it up or keep reworking it.
I don't think I've even managed to tell the story, let alone do some decent pics yet. And all these are heavily based on the film anyway, not much of it is my actual original input.
Did enjoy trying out inks, even if I made a terrible mess. What I have managed is to make something a little more free and loose, but I also really like the cartoony one that's all in blue. I'm going to end up with a book worth of just alternative versions of this one story!